The Following Is The ORIGINAL plot set for ICE as was conceived many years
ago. They died on the vine. It even used original character
names...
Chapter One - DONE
Introduce Alan
Find MRAI
Sell MRAI and get chased away
Chapter Two - NOT STARTED
Perhaps Rename Jon to "peter fletcher"
Introduce Jon Mitsui
Fly to meeting in Chicago about MRAI
Urges the termination of MRAI
project.
IntaComp execs ask about the whereabouts of the chip
Jon says hey threw it away (in anger)
Execs get pissed saying "what if it gets into the wrong
hands?"
Jon replies that he smashed the chip with a hammer, no
one could use it
Chapter Three - NOT STARTED
Bring Alan to Shack in Michigan
Introduce Jim Archey
Jim is an MD who is shunned by medical community
Jim runs a drug lab in his basement (includes useful
drugs, like memory enhancers)
Jim fixes up Alan's bullet wound, no good anesthetics,
makes jock about passing out before the pain gets 'real' bad
Alan stays with Jim for a few days
Alan decides to try to retrieve the chip
Jim lends Alan a old car from 1998
Alan gets Jim to retrieve his equipment wile gone
Alan leaves to talk to an associate in Chicago
Chapter Four - NOT STARTED
Jon gets "visited" by some IntaComp thugs
Jon is taken somewhere and interrogated about the fact
that Alan had the chip
Jon is given an injection of an amnesiac, serious side
effects occur and he loses a bunch of his long term memory
Jon is seriously pissed about this and plans to seek out
Alan to get the chip
Jon breaks into Alan's apartment to get clues on Alan's
whereabouts
Chapter Five - NOT STARTED
Focus on Jim
Accentuate the self destructive nature of his reckless
behavior
Leaves to retrieve Alan's equipment
Finds someone in Alan's apartment
Short gun fire exchange, weapon somehow knocked away from
person in apartment
Person revealed to be Jon
Equipment has been damaged, Jon offers help with restoring
the data on equipments hard drive
Jim reluctantly accepts, and takes Jon (blind folded) to
the shack
Jim retrieves equipment remains, also stops by Jon's to
get equipment
Insert some joke by Jon about this being blindfolded an
taken places becoming second nature to him
Chapter Six - NOT STARTED
Focus on Alan
Alan meats associate (Jack)
Jack hears things (very streetwise)
Jack finds out that a copy of the chip is an IntaComp
building in Chicago
They plan a break in and execute it
Requires on of Jacks friends to take
care of security by hacking
Jack and Alan (in disguise) enter building,
small ear phone communication thingies used
Jack acts as gun man in event that
cover is blown
Alan retrieves chip from high security
storage room (ala noc list room in mission impossible)
Computer dude fucks up/ cove is blown
the two blast their way out of the
building
Jack gets shot down in the very end
Alan gets away in car, head out to
shack
Chapter Se7en - NOT STARTED
Focus on corporate execs
They talk about how a bug was put on Jon
Talk about plan to infuriate Jon into finding Alan seems
to be working
joke about how much cheaper this is than hiring a tracker
done
Chapter Eight - NOT STARTED
Focus on Alan
Alan arrives back at the shack before Jim
Jim arrives with Jon
"Gee, its the guy that got me into
this whole mess..."
"I never put a gun to your head and
told you to steal the chip from me..."
Alan and Jon discuss stuff about IntaComp as Jon is repairing
Alan's data cores
Fixed data cores stuck in Jims computer
They get that data, and hack some more from IntaComp with
help of Jon
Everything gets backed up on cartridge,
They find bug
They remove bug and leave it by the computer( and leave
the computer on with the message 'your too late suckers' in big letters)
They all get ready to haul ass out of there
they use Jim's new 'special' truck
choppers heard overhead
short chase with one of the choppers
Jim launches a missile from a small armament hidden in
truck
they get away
they let Jim off in a town somewhere
Chapter Nine - NOT STARTED
Focus on Jon and Alan
Jon knows someone in twin cities that could help them
They get in argument about how much Jon played right into
intacomps hands
They leave for twin cities
Chapter ten - NOT STARTED
Focus on Jim
he walks around town awhile
goes to a bar and drinks himself stupid
leaves the bar, stumbling around
black car drives by
gun man takes Jim out
"last thing he saw was the angular face of the IntaComp
logo"
Chapter Eleven - NOT STARTED
reach twin cities, meat with friend
they find a file embedded within one of the stolen files
that is iced
some sort of descriptive bit about breaking through ICE
on the files they got
they find in this definitive proof of cover up, and some
larger things too
-like plans to eventually put doctors
out of work by using this chip
-plans to build from that a monopoly
over people health insurance
they plan to broadcast this information
Chapter Twelve (the climax) - NOT STARTED
they all break into a building that is the main satellite
uplink for GNN (heir to CNN)
IntaComp catches up to their whereabouts
some sort of final confrontation. Jon gets killed
that data gets broadcasted to all of America
Chapter Thirteen (the resolution) - NOT STARTED
talk about Alan's computer business booming
talk about how he has started an open store front
talk about IntaComp being forced to sell out to a bigger
company because of stock marked losses after the whole event
the end